Poetry

I don't write poetry. So please critique the style, flow, rhythm, etc. This is actually the second poem I've written this week. Funny... everything is coming out with a flow that tells me "New line here, capitalize this" that can only be done in verse. Anyway, please critique and enjoy!

The Tribute

You have no idea how much

I need you.

As soon as I'm down,

You're there

Lifting me up

And making it all better.

You are the cure to any ailment.

Those you can't cure,

You comfort

And get me through.

You and I

Have love wars,

Where we finally have to call

Truce

Because we can't stop telling each other

How awesome we are.

But,

I'll admit,

You usually win.

You make me feel like the most

Beautiful,

Talented,

Kind

Person in the world.

I know I'm not,

But when you're telling me,

I believe it.

You know more about me

Than you think.

Even if I forget everything about you,

You never fail

To remember

And check up on me.

If I've stopped worrying about something,

There's no doubt

It's still on your mind.

You love me that much.

I never knew someone could.

But somehow you do.

You are

The sunshine in my day,

The smile on my face,

And you don't even know it.

You don't know

How much I depend on you,

How much I miss you when you're gone,

How much I look forward to seeing you.

If you knew,

You would also know

I'm trying to be better.

I'm trying to remember.

I'm trying to be everything

You make me believe I am.

I love you that much.

I didn't know I could,

But I do.

Thank you.